The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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We have two images that present us with how
cement
and concrete are produced.
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cement
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cement
is a needed ingredient in order to obtain concrete.
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see that to produce Linking Words
cement
we need an entire Use synonyms
production
line, and it needs to be produced in a factory because there are special conditions and special equipment needed to obtain it.
Meanwhile, for concrete Use synonyms
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it is not mandatory to produce it in a factory, one can make concrete Use synonyms
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at home, only by mixing Linking Words
cement
, sand, water, and gravel together, without needing a piece of special equipment.
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, we can conclude that the energy used to produce Linking Words
cement
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because for Linking Words
cement
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we need the crusher, the mixer, the rotating heater, heat, and the grinder.
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producing concrete, you can only mix the ingredients with a shovel or with a concrete mixer and you need energy only for the latter.
In conclusion, we cannot obtain concrete without having Change preposition
apply
cement
and we can obtain concrete only by mixing a few ingredients: Use synonyms
cement
, water, sand, and gravel.Use synonyms
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