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A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company.  In your letter,  -introduce your previous work experience  -tell the manager which department you want to work  -describe what expectation you have from the job

#company #job #salary #gain #work #manager #-introduce #-tell #department #-describe #expectation
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter with regards to the position as advertised on the official website of your event management company. As you can see from my CV, I have not only done an internship for one year in a medical centre but
also
 have worked for several private clinics. Caring for patients who suffered from acute muscle pain strains and giving them health advice were parts of my job duty at that time.
In addition
, I hold a
first
 aid certificate which is valid for 2 years. I noticed from the job description that it requires someone who can work temporarily in the general affairs department and give help in the upcoming marathon event. I believe that my experience would make me a competitive candidate. Even though it is an unpaid position, taking care of athletes will definitely be an irreplaceable experience.
Also
, I anticipate learning how to address emergency problems outside medical institutes through
this
 job. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kelly Hsu
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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