Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about my jacket which I left after my recent visit to your cinema. Here

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the

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some details about my item, it is Gucci's jacket, black in

color

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, made from leather.

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Also

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it has white lines on the back with Gucci's brand logo on it. I do not exactly remember where was my seat

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I did not manage to find my ticket but I am sure that it was

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really close to

emergency

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the emergency

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exit on the left side of the stage. I would be grateful if you can check with venue cleaning personnel if they found it and if the answer is positive I could come and pick it up at some point

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week. Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours Faithfully,

Sattor

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Sattar

Kadirov

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Word Count

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

143 words

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Word Count

Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does the cause? What are some possible solution.

Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, ​however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work.​ Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but put are in nurse homes or care homes. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.