Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about my jacket which I left after my recent visit to your cinema. Here

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some details about my item, it is Gucci's jacket, black in

color

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, made from leather.

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it has white lines on the back with Gucci's brand logo on it. I do not exactly remember where was my seat

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I did not manage to find my ticket but I am sure that it was

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really close to

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exit on the left side of the stage. I would be grateful if you can check with venue cleaning personnel if they found it and if the answer is positive I could come and pick it up at some point

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week. Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours Faithfully,

Sattor

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Sattar

Kadirov

Submitted by kadirov.sattor755 on Sun Jul 31 2022

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

143 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Word Count

in many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? give reasons and make some suggestions.

In the contemporary workplace, some recruiter insist on prioritizing candidates with strong theoretical knowledge and academic background whilst others prefer employee with practical skills regarding applying experience can address the hurdle occured in the work

Housing wastage in big cities can cause severe social consequences.Some people think only government action can solve this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?