Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about my jacket which I left after my recent visit to your cinema. Here
is
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are

The singular verb form is does not seem to agree with the plural subject the some details about my item, it is Gucci's jacket, black in color, made from leather. Consider changing the verb form.

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the
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apply

It is unlikely that your sentence needs the article the before some. Consider deleting the article.

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some details about my item, it is Gucci's jacket, black in
color
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colour

The spelling of color is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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, made from leather.
Also
Add a comma
,Also

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Also. Consider adding a comma.

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it has white lines on the back with Gucci's brand logo on it. I do not exactly remember where was my seat
cause
Correct word choice
because

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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I did not manage to find my ticket but I am sure that it was
between
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apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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really close to
emergency
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the emergency

The noun phrase emergency exit seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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exit on the left side of the stage. I would be grateful if you can check with venue cleaning personnel if they found it and if the answer is positive I could come and pick it up at some point
this
week. Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours Faithfully,
Sattor
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Sattar

If you don’t want Sattor to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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