You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: describe the item that you left in the room explain where you think the item might be suggest how the manager can return the item to you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to finding

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laptop that I left at your premises. I would highly appreciate

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you can help me

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because all my working documents are archived in it. I

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checked out today at 2pm and my room number was A12. My laptop was left in the

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top drawer of the right bedside table. It has a black leather case with several pockets and white stripes on the sides and

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a green mousepad stuck to the back. If you look inside the case you will find a card with my name on it. I would be grateful if you could arrange a courier service to send my laptop back to me, because I

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my flight back home, and I will not be able to pick it up. It will be great if you could send me a PayPal link to pay for the postage. I would appreciate it if you could… Could you please send… Thanks in advance. Yours faithfully, Ana Carr Rollitt

Submitted by a.carrrollitt on Mon Aug 01 2022

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You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: describe the item that you left in the room explain where you think the item might be suggest how the manager can return the item to you

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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