As transportation and housing problems increase in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

As traffic and accommodation pressure have rocketed by leaps and bounds
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recent years, the rural-to-urban
shift
has been a crucial topic to discuss nowadays. Many opine that
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the economic
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from civic
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to urban regions can decrease
this
pressure and positively encourage more commercial chances. From my own perspective ,
this
can not only level
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the traffic and housing pressure
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but bring more opportunities to the rural
area
,detailed
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are as followed.
First
of all, it is undeniable that today's world has become over-populated ,especially
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urban
area
.
For instance
, in China, citizens living in
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highly developed
areas
usually shoulder much responsibility, making every effort to keep themselves staying in the city, paying back their house loans and bearing the traffic congestion
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.
However
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if there is any promising condition
such
as the same occupation in rural
areas
, people may have more energy to work hard and live their life positively. And
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why I approve the proposal of the
shift
as mentioned.
Moreover
, due to the obvious situation
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there
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larger
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to live in the rural
areas
,with the potential infrastructure to be built, more and more job
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placements
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can be provided.
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the
shift
of commercial businesses can bring more chances to the rural
areas
. Under
this
circumstance, the economically deprived stereotype of rural
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can be altered.
However
, it is difficult to say what will really happen after the
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the lack of
infrastructure
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such
as health
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centers
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and basic
market
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markets
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in the rural
areas
. Those are seeable in the cities, but a challenge to be tackled in the rural spaces .But there exists
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solution
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it, with everyone's effort. In conclusion, when analyzing
this
topic, I do believe the pros of
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the rural-to-urban
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shift
overweights the cons.
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