some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more im-portant than History

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is crucial, as it helps children understand the current world from their own view.

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, others agree with putting more emphasis on

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and

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heavily

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on high-tech and

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as statics and basic principles. I strongly suggest that

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cannot be

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considering the fact that we are living

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with

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full of uncertainty.

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of all,

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will tell you the general trend of

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. It is true that we tend to use multiple IT devices

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as PC or mobile phones for basic activities including purchasing products, exchanging money, making reservations, etc. It means that we have to learn at least how to use those devices. What’s more, the deeper understanding you acquire

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the

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, the more quickly you can finish

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daily routine.

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, learning

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will enable users to think about relevant risks with the device. Some geeks chose android phones

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of iPhones

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after they studied what had happened in internet

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and realised the risks related

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the dominant supplier or platform.

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, experts use statistics and possibilities to make a prediction more precise, but

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prediction

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can be obtained

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historical facts. An economist got the novel

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by proving people

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to make the most of their profits, which sounds too obvious from human nature. To gain basic knowledge,

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displays human nature

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more clearly compared with

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and

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. Young adults who are not sure about their future jobs can take an advantage of limited time in school education by learning

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basic

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as

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. Those who want to be experts might learn

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and

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afterwards, but the priority would not be as high as

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. In conclusion,

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and

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play an important role in our current lives,

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must be taught in schools for the reasons I mentioned above. It not only facilitates

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of similar technologies and

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their hidden risks

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but

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helps grasp rough guess about human behaviours.