You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

Dear Principal, I am writing
this
letter with regards to the open position of
sports
teacher in our school.
Hence
, I would like to introduce one of my childhood friends since my elementary school days. I know him very well, in fact, my friend and I graduated from same the University. As I said, he has done his
sports
master's degree from a reputed institution.
Furthermore
, he
also
has profound experience in
sports
coaching activities despite the solid academic marks and degrees.
In addition
, he participated in national-level
sports
competitions and secured
first
place. I strongly believe that his great experience and phenomenal track record in his career would be an asset to our school. His immaculate experience would be a great help to our students.
However
, he may
also
produce required documents as part of the reference checks and
further
validations. Considering the above all points he would be the right candidate for
this
open position and I would recommend his profile for
this
post. I look forward to hearing a response with good news and please do let me know if we needed any additional details to move forward. Yours Sincerely, Lakshmi.
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