Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Water
depositories around the world are the major source of drinking water
for all the
living beings whether human society or animals around us. In order to save these Correct article usage
apply
resources
and our environment a lot of people are putting their efforts, however
increasing pollution of rivers
, lakes and seas are
becoming Correct subject-verb agreement
is
hurdle
for them. Add an article
a hurdle
This
essay will discuss the causes and the effects of it on animal life and human society.
Firstly
, contamination of water
becomes major
concern and Add an article
a major
this
is highly caused through
several sourcesChange preposition
by
Add the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
releasing of industrial waste
, releasing human waste
, creating a
dumping grounds near Correct article usage
apply
to
the reserves, rituals like bone Immersion etc. Since countries are moving towards industrialization and highly Change preposition
apply
depends
on industrial products for their daily needs, Correct subject-verb agreement
depend
whereas
most of them are unaware of the harm that they are causing to our environment. Industries like steel, chemical, textile etc. These industries release highly toxic and hazardous Correct word choice
apply
waste
into the rivers
, lakes and seas, due to which water
becomes unfit for its consumption.
In addition
to industrial waste
, deposits of dumping grounds of human waste
are creating water
pollution. These depositories around the corners of rivers
releases
harmful material Change the verb form
release
in
the Change preposition
into
water
and causing
dirtying of Wrong verb form
cause
water
.
Adulteration of water
resources
highly affects the lives of living beings, as water
is very necessary for all the organs of a body to work efficiently. Drinking contaminated water
would have adverse
effect on the health Add an article
an adverse
for example
cancer, organ failure, viral infection; Also
it can sometimes leads
to Change the verb form
lead
lose
of life Replace the word
loss
for example
due to highly toxic water
released through industries several fish species got extinct, lots of animal
Change to a plural noun
animals
loosing
lives after drinking Replace the word
losing
water
from these depositories.
Furthermore
, polluting water
results in loosing of fresh
Correct your spelling
freshwater
water
resources
and creating high
scarcity of drinking Add an article
a high
water
and
because of Correct word choice
apply
which
there is a chance that the fresh drinking Correct pronoun usage
this
water
becomes unavailable for future
Add an article
the future
generation
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
generations
government
should take appropriate Add an article
the government
measure
towards stopping Fix the agreement mistake
measures
these
dumping and stand with those who are eagerly working towards preserving Correct determiner usage
this
water
resources
. Also
, one should also
take responsibility of
not littering their Change preposition
for
waste
in the lakes, rivers
and sea.Submitted by cashivam2675 on
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