Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Water

depositories around the world are the major source of drinking

water

for all

the

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living beings whether human society or animals around us. In order to save these

resources

and our environment a lot of people are putting their efforts,

however

increasing pollution of

rivers

, lakes and seas

are

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becoming

hurdle

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a hurdle

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for them.

This

essay will discuss the causes and the effects of it on animal life and human society.

Firstly

, contamination of

water

becomes

major

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concern and

this

is highly caused

through

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several sources

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for example

releasing of industrial

waste

, releasing human

waste

, creating

a

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dumping grounds near

to

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the reserves, rituals like bone Immersion etc. Since countries are moving towards industrialization and highly

depends

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on industrial products for their daily needs,

whereas

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most of them are unaware of the harm that they are causing to our environment. Industries like steel, chemical, textile etc. These industries release highly toxic and hazardous

waste

into the

rivers

, lakes and seas, due to which

water

becomes unfit for its consumption.

In addition

to industrial

waste

, deposits of dumping grounds of human

waste

are creating

water

pollution. These depositories around the corners of

rivers

releases

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harmful material

in

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into

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the

water

and

causing

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dirtying of

water

. Adulteration of

water

resources

highly affects the lives of living beings, as

water

is very necessary for all the organs of a body to work efficiently. Drinking contaminated

water

would have

adverse

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an adverse

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effect on the health

for example

cancer, organ failure, viral infection;

Also

it can sometimes

leads

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to

lose

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loss

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of life

for example

due to highly toxic

water

released through industries several fish species got extinct, lots of

animal

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animals

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loosing

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lives after drinking

water

from these depositories.

Furthermore

, polluting

water

results in loosing of

fresh

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freshwater

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water

resources

and creating

high

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a high

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scarcity of drinking

water

and

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because of

which

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there is a chance that the fresh drinking

water

becomes unavailable for

future

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the future

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generation

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generations

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. In conclusion,

government

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the government

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should take appropriate

measure

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measures

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towards stopping

these

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dumping and stand with those who are eagerly working towards preserving

water

resources

.

Also

, one should

also

take responsibility

of

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not littering their

waste

in the lakes,

rivers

and sea.