Employers should give staff at least four weeks holidays a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The main authority of
organisation
should provide at least 28 daysCorrect article usage
the organisation
Change preposition
of
vacations
to their workers.Fix the agreement mistake
vacation
In addition
to this
,it is ponder
that it may be beneficial for the industry owner because their labour would Wrong verb form
pondered
better
at their job.Add a missing verb
be better
However
,sometimes world load would be increased and it is unable to handle with less staff
,it would decrease the interest of staff
.Although
,I disagree with the notion and I will share my views in the upcoming fragments.
To commence with,in the gadget era the need machine
parts and productivity would dramatically increase due to excessive use of products in business and daily life routine.To elaborateChange preposition
for machine
it
,if the workers of the company would be on leaves Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
it is impossible to manage with less worker ratio because pressure
will be increased on them.Add an article
the pressure
For example
,in 2021,as per report
of factory Add an article
the report
a report
organisation
, less than 80% Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
industries
Change preposition
of industries
are
failed because Unnecessary verb
apply
at
the high productivity they do not have Change preposition
of
staff
for production.Thus
, the leave system may be managed properly.
Furthermore
,the staff
of the company need to show their interest in their working routine.But when they came back from their leaves they do not have engrossment for
work.Change preposition
in
In other words
,a worker work
correctly when he Change the verb form
works
decide
to work in Correct subject-verb agreement
decides
right
way so that Add an article
the right
the
production will not decrease.Correct article usage
apply
For Instance
,as per the
Correct article usage
apply
psychologist
Winey Garg’s data 95% Add a comma
,psychologist
factories
will fail due to Change preposition
of factories
lack
of attentiveness in their job title.Correct article usage
a lack
Hence
,the heed of labour would up and down the progress of the employer’s industry.
To conclude this
,the leave system should not be disregarded.Yet,it should be managed in a systematic way.Submitted by workhasdone on
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