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The line graph shows the number of
money
 people spent on
health
, energy, space, general
science
 and other things from 1980 to 2008. Obviously, most people tended to spend
money
 on
health
 care.
In contrast
, general
science
 seemed to be much less appealing because the
amount
 of
money
 spent on
this
 area was the lowest. In 1980, about 8
billion
dollars
 were used for improving or maintaining
health
.
This
 figure was slightly higher than approximately 8
billion
dollars
 spent on space and other aspects of life.
In addition
, 5
billion
dollars
 were taken to pay for the energy bills, which was far higher than 3
billion
dollars
 spent on general
science
. The
amount
 of
money
 used for
health
 care peaked in 2004 at 23
billion
dollars
 and
then
 decrease to below 20
billion
dollars
, but it was still the most enormous
amount
 of
money
 used in that year.
Money
 spent on space rose to nearly 10
billion
dollars
, followed by around 6
billion
dollars
 the figure for energy. Meanwhile, the lowest
amount
 of
money
 with around 5
billion
dollars
 was spent on
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general
science
 and other things.
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