The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the percentage of
water
utilized for industrial, agricultural, and domestic use in six countries of the world.
Overall
, the most significant amount of
water
is spent
for
Change preposition
on
show examples
farming even though there are
also
manufactory contributed to the highest purposes in two other places.
Water
employed for agriculture is the most dominant need in some areas including Central
Asia
, Africa, Southeast
Asia
, and South America. Among other countries, Central
Asia
leads
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the highest percentage, at 89%.
Next
, even though domestic use is the least popular of
water
usage in Central
Asia
and Southeast
Asia
, its trend is reversed
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
Africa and South America. With regards to the remaining
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
water
purposes, industrial use comprises of significant rate in two other regions (North America and Europe) which
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
stood at 53% and 49% respectively. The same trend is accounted for
agricultural
Add an article
the agricultural
show examples
sector,
while
domestic purpose is the fewest proportion of
water
utility.
Submitted by serlyayus on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
What to do next:
Look at other essays: