You are a college student who applies for a part-time job in a shop during the summer vacation. Write a letter to the shop owner. In your letter Describe where you got the job information Explain why you are a suitable person for the job Ask for serious consideration

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Dear Sir/

madam

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Madam

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, I am writing to apply for the part-time

job

in your book shop during

this

summer vacation. I am a

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marketing

markerting

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marketing

major

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the

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apply

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Oxford college. I saw the

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adverstisment

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for

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this

job

on the internet. I am looking for a part-time

job

. I have

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a lot about

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marketing

markerting

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marketing

strategies and policies

this

semester. I will stay in town for the whole summer vacation. I can work

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both weekdays and weekends.

Last

semester, I had a part-time

job

in the college book store. I think that I am a suitable candidate for

this

job

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because I have both the experience and time schedule for

this

part

job

. I would be grateful if you could consider my application. I am available

this

week for an interview. Please reach me anytime by phone at 64902222. Yours sincerely, Ada

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

140 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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