you recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Mr Ravi a daily commuter on your
bus
services and I am writing
this
letter with regret and express a concern regarding a
bus
driver who took a ride at 2pm from Vancouver to Burnaby on 12th August. As you know, the route between these two stations is always busy and sometime we may need to wait for a long time on the
bus
. Unfortunately, the driver who drove the
bus
made us feel terrified and put us at a big risk as he is keep on driving the
bus
with 100 KPH which was not at all expected.
In addition
, he did not stop the vehicle at the designated place despite requesting multiple times to follow the rules. As you heard,
this
kind of incident is not good in our transport system.
Hence
, I would request you to provide some additional training along with an expert coach who can check his performance sporadically. If required please replace them with a new driver until he feels confident about his work. I would really appreciate it if you could consider our request and make our journey smooth without any
furthermore
issues. I look forward to seeing your support and hope that we are going to have a nice experience during our journey. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.
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