You have seen an advertisement in an Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter: - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your time while you are in Australia.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the babysitting job for your child which was advertised in the magazine, The Family Man.
My name is Fiona Lewis, and I live in Delhi. While I was glancing through the magazine, I came across
this
opportunity which made me so happy as I am someone who is fond of kids. I love spending my time with them and engaging them in different play activities. Moreover
, I am willing to relocate temporarily to Australia to have an
international exposure.
By profession, I am a babysitter, and I Remove the article
apply
also
have an experience of 5 years in a play school. I am trained and certified to provide best
care to infants and kids Change the article
the best
of
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up
upto
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up to
a
age of 10 years. Correct article usage
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Although
I have never been to any foreign country, I can easily adapt to new
environment, and my Add an article
a new
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english
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proficency
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proficiency
In addition
to this
, I do not have any personal responsibilities as I am unmarried.
If I get this
opportunity, I would also
like to explore the
new country. As Australia is known for its beaches, I would like to spend my free time there and learn various water sports. Correct article usage
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Also
, I would definitely like to try the local cuisine there.
I hope you would like my profile for taking care of your kid, and I am hoping a
positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Fiona LewisChange preposition
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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