many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals. What are the advantages to it. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, processed
food
has become a predominant part of human life, while the main advantage of
this
trend is that it would help to save
people
's time and the main drawback of
this
is that it can affect human health, ready-made
food
has several merits. On the one hand, the main benefit of
this
food
is it would help to save
people
's valuable time. with a busy schedule,
people
would try to purchase foods, including at cafes, restaurants and supermarkets etc. because it takes only a few minutes to cook,
For instance
, research shows, in Canada's
food
consumption, that 50% of
people
consume readymade foods because they did not
liked
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to waste their time
Furthermore
, another benefit of
this
food
is that it can purchase at very affordable prices,
people
spend their money on junk foods because these are delicious and inexpensive.
This
way, it would aid to save
people
's money so it
also
plays a crucial role in its
people
's economy
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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