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You are looking for a part time job. Write a letter to a employment agency. IN your letter : -introduce your self -explain what sort of job you would like -say what experience and skill you have

#part #time #job #employment #agency #-introduce #self #-explain #sort #-say #skill
Dear sir I am writing to you to consider my warm request for jobs that you
have
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asked for on the internet
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 week on the website.
It
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 will be
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proud
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me if I can participate in classified
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part-time
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part time
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part-time
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 occupations. My name is Parsa Mohammadi and I am an experienced English teacher with ten years of teaching practice. I am professional
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 holding online classes and working with practical online teaching tools,
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 as Wordwall and Kahoot. You can easily ask for my background on my website.
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 I can do programming and edit learning movies that are sharable on Youtube.
Finally
, I should mention that I am a university student and I couldn't a part of your company if you want me to work as a full-time employee. Yours faithfully Parsa
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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