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Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • Say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have seen your job advertised in the newspaper,
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 I am writing to express my interest in working for your
company
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. In fact, I am 34
years
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 old
who
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and
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 studied electrical engineering at university and I graduated 10
years
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 ago.
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, I am living in the same town as your
company
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 is located in.
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, I have been married for 5
years
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 and I do not have any children. Indeed, I am a well-experienced person with 8
years
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 of work experience who have been working for an electrical
company
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 which is called BREC, whose duty is the operation of electrical transmission lines and power stations. At
this
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company
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, I worked in the maintenance unit in power stations.
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, you need an engineer with at least 5
years
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 of work experience in the maintenance of power stations, I am writing
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 letter.
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, I am extremely responsible and talented and I have vast knowledge in my field. I remain at your disposal for any
further
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 information. Yours faithfully, Mohammad Hossein ranjbari
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my interest in the [Position] advertised in [Newspaper].
  • I have [number] years of experience in [Your Field/Industry].
  • In my previous role at [Previous Company], I was responsible for [Key Responsibilities].
  • I successfully [Achievement or Project], which resulted in [Result/Impact].
  • I am particularly attracted to [Company Name] because of [Reason].
  • I believe my skills in [Key Skill] and [Another Skill] align well with the requirements of the job.
  • My ability to [Relevant Skill or Experience] would make a valuable addition to your team.
  • I am eager to contribute to [Company Name]’s success by [How You Can Contribute].
  • Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my application further.
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