Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
a part of the public
think
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thinks
history
is one of the most essential subjects, but other says, these days, other subjects like science is
more important than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
history
. I totally agree, and I believe that technology has a direct connection with the vital of people.
On the one hand, it has
important what happened in the past. In fact, by knowing about the past, society becomes aware and their life can be helped by their knowledge. Verb problem
is
In other words
, if society faces new problems, individuals could use the experience of past generations. For example
, these days due to
the war between Russia and Ukraine, the government know if Russia does not stop its attack, world war three
could be started, and everyone who knows about Correct your spelling
World War Three
world war two
and its terrible consequences tries to stop Russia from Correct your spelling
World War Two
attack
. Wrong verb form
attacking
Therefore
, history
should be one of the school objects, but there are some more important objects be existed
.
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exist
On the other hand
, most individuals can live without knowing about the past, but they cannot live without science. In fact, technology has an irrefutable role almost in all individual lives. For instance
, an engineer who invents a robot that helps untouchable individuals or a surgeon who survives a patient from
death, Change preposition
patient's
they
do not need to know about the past and can help people without knowledge about the past. Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a result
, there are been some more helpful subjects which require teaching children in schools.
In conclusion, in my opinion, these days, educating children in the field of science and technology is more necessary than history
. Because the former can act more efficient
with regard to surviving people and help them to have a convenient life. Change the word
efficiently
Although
the
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apply
history
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