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Coffee production comparison in different countries between 1990 to 2010. Compare and discuss the bar char.

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The given bar chart compares the changes in
coffee
production
 volume in
Brazil
, Colombia, Indonesia and
Vietnam
 between 1990 and 2010. Units were measured in
million
tonnes
. In general, it is clearly evident that
Brazil
 was the highest
coffee
 producer whereas
Vietnam
 produced the least amount throughout the given period. Except for Colombia, other countries showed an upward trend in
coffee
production
. Interestingly,
Brazil
 produced by far the most
coffee
 from 1990 to 2010, whereas, other countries'
coffee
production
 showed a significantly lower range.
Coffee
production
 in
Brazil
 had increased considerably from about 0.7
million
tonnes
 in 1990 to nearly a 1.9million
tonnes
 in 2010.
However
, Indonesia and
Vietnam
 had a smaller compared to
Brazil
.
In addition
,
coffee
production
 in Indonesia doubled within the two decades to 0.4
million
tonnes
 in 2010, whereas,
Vietnam
's
coffee
production
 grew from 0.1 to 0.3
million
tonnes
 from 1990 to 2010.
In contrast
, in 1990, Colombia was the
second
 largest
coffee
 producer at 0.6million
tonnes
 which experienced a gradual decline in
production
 to 0.3
million
tonnes
 in 2010.
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