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Coffee production comparison in different countries between 1990 to 2010. Compare and discuss the bar char.

The given bar chart compares the changes in
coffee
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production
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 volume in
Brazil
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, Colombia, Indonesia and
Vietnam
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 between 1990 and 2010. Units were measured in
million
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tonnes
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. In general, it is clearly evident that
Brazil
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 was the highest
coffee
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 producer whereas
Vietnam
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 produced the least amount throughout the given period. Except for Colombia, other countries showed an upward trend in
coffee
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production
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. Interestingly,
Brazil
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 produced by far the most
coffee
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 from 1990 to 2010, whereas, other countries'
coffee
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production
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 showed a significantly lower range.
Coffee
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production
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 in
Brazil
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 had increased considerably from about 0.7
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 to nearly a 1.9million
tonnes
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 in 2010.
However
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, Indonesia and
Vietnam
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 had a smaller compared to
Brazil
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.
In addition
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,
coffee
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production
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 in Indonesia doubled within the two decades to 0.4
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010, whereas,
Vietnam
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's
coffee
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production
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 grew from 0.1 to 0.3
million
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tonnes
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 from 1990 to 2010.
In contrast
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, in 1990, Colombia was the
second
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 largest
coffee
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 producer at 0.6million
tonnes
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 which experienced a gradual decline in
production
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 to 0.3
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010.

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