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Write a description of your house or apartment. What kind of house/ apartment is it? Where is it exactly? What rooms does it have? Does it have any special features? Describe the neighborhood. How far is it from places of interest? What public transportation is there? Who is the house/ apartment suitable for? Are there any restrictions?

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My
Apartment
: I am going to share with you a description of
my
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 ideal
apartment
 that I would like to live in.
This
apartment
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 perfectly situated on a quiet street and safe. I prefer a
cozy
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 place,so, I would expect it to be not too big, about 120 to 140 square meters, when it comes to cleaning the house, you would not feel discouraged by all the chores you have to do. It's a beautiful place with 3 bedrooms,
living
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 room and 2balconies. In my
opinion
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 having
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balconies
balcony
balconie
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 is very important and necessary. It would be great if my
apartment
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overlooked
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over looked
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 a river or garden,and it should be located on a high floor. I would like my
apartment
 near the subway station and bus stop, just it has short walking ,
also
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easy
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 assistant to
shopping
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the shopping
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center
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.
My
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 opinion
this
apartment
 is perfect for a small family of parents and two children.
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