coffee production comparison may countries from a decade. copmare and contrast and give your opinion.
The green bar chart compares the changes in
coffee
production
volume in Brazil
, Colombia, Indonesia, and Vietnam from 1990 to 2010. Units were measured in million
tonnes
.In general, it is clearly evident that Brazil
was the largest coffee
producer, whereas Vietnam produced the least amount of coffee
throughout the given period. Interestingly, Brazil
's coffee
production
was significantly higher than all other countries. However
, except Colombia
, other countries saw an upward trend in Change preposition
for Colombia
coffee
production
.Brazil
's coffee
production
was
dramatically rose from about 0.7 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
tonnes
to approximately 1.9 million
tonnes
from 1990 to 2010, while coffee
production
in Indonesia was
doubled to 0.4 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2010. In addition
, in 1990 coffee
production
in Vietnam was
gradually went up from about 0.1 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
tonnes
to 0.3 million
tonnes
in 2010.In contrast
, Colombia was the second
largest coffee
producer at 0.6 million
tonnes
in 1990, which experienced a gradual decline in coffee
production
to 0.3 million
tonnes
in 2010.Submitted by sandamalipc1 on
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