You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •say where you think you left the paper •explain why they are so important •tell the mamager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to
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you that I left a very important document at your hotel during our annual company meeting. Inside the folder are the business receipts of
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sales. My name is Charles stayed
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234, located beside a canteen. After our convention, I accidentally left my documents inside the locker. The key is located in the kitchen, on top of
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. Those papers are important for the monthly sales evaluation, without those receipts I will lose my job as a manager of our company Please go to your nearest courier to send those letters and please write your postal details so that I can give you some money to send those papers Thank you for
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effort regarding
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