IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4

These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvatages of working and living in a foreign country.

#people #countries #periods #time #job #study #face #difficulties #disadvatages #country
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Leisure pools are generally considered
as
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the most relaxing type of
having
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
time of your life.
However
Linking Words
,
such
Linking Words
 areas are not the most enjoyable rest facilities for me. What I enjoy paying
visit
Add an article
a visit
show examples
 to most are guesthouses in the mountains. - To deal with the problem smth might be done To deal with the polio pandemic governments together with the population might agree to stay in quarantine until
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
scientists
sciencists
Correct your spelling
scientists
 invent a vaccine so as not to spread the disease. - Set out powerful
arguments
Use synonyms
 In spite of the fact that
Use synonyms
sciencists
Correct your spelling
scientists
 set out powerful
arguments
Use synonyms
 in favour of processed foods and, what is more, they draw attention to the significant contribution in alleviating poverty made by GM goods, the common opinion is that preservatives and chemicals ,which are comprised in some sort of nutrition, are harmful and may lead to severe ailments. Leisure pools are generally considered
as
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the most relaxing type of
having
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
time of your life.
However
Linking Words
,
such
Linking Words
 areas are not the most enjoyable rest facilities for me. What I enjoy paying
visit
Add an article
a visit
show examples
 to most are guesthouses in the mountains. - To deal with the problem smth might be done To deal with the polio pandemic governments together with the population might agree to stay in quarantine until
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
scientists
sciencists
Correct your spelling
scientists
 invent a vaccine so as not to spread the disease. - Set out powerful
arguments
Use synonyms
 In spite of the fact that
Use synonyms
sciencists
Correct your spelling
scientists
 set out powerful
arguments
Use synonyms
 in favour of processed foods and, what is more, they draw attention to the significant contribution in alleviating poverty made by GM goods, the common opinion is that preservatives and chemicals ,which are comprised in some sort of nutrition, are harmful and may lead to severe ailments.
Submitted by ananiangagik on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: