You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, • Let your landlord know that you will be leaving • Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

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letter to notify you of my intention to vacate the apartment I am presently occupying on your property at Hobart by 12th August 2022.

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, it Is a very difficult decision for me having spent nearly four years as your tenant couple with the cordial relationship we shared.

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, I have to leave because I have been transferred to our new station at Berth as the station manager.

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, let me use

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medium to show my appreciation for all the help you have offered me to make my stay a memorable one at your property. Especially, the free food coach you offered to perfect my cook skills. Forever, I will be grateful.

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, my best friend Thomas will like to take over the house as a tenant after my vacation.

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,he has just been transferred to Hobart media centre and he needs accommodation close to his place of work. Thomas is a reliable, neat and honest fellow,

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, I can recommend him that you will surely enjoy his stay in the apartment as your neighbour.

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, I hope my friend will be considered and the house will be reserved for him.

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, thanks a bunch for your anticipated cooperation. Your Sincerely, Thomas Cole

aimoshoodWed Aug 24 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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211 words

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