You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, • Let your landlord know that you will be leaving • Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to notify you of my intention to vacate the apartment I am presently occupying on your property at Hobart by 12th August 2022.

Firstly

, it Is a very difficult decision for me having spent nearly four years as your tenant couple with the cordial relationship we shared.

Besides

, I have to leave because I have been transferred to our new station at Berth as the station manager.

Moreover

, let me use

this

medium to show my appreciation for all the help you have offered me to make my stay a memorable one at your property. Especially, the free food coach you offered to perfect my cook skills. Forever, I will be grateful.

Secondly

, my best friend Thomas will like to take over the house as a tenant after my vacation.

Also

,he has just been transferred to Hobart media centre and he needs accommodation close to his place of work. Thomas is a reliable, neat and honest fellow,

hence

, I can recommend him that you will surely enjoy his stay in the apartment as your neighbour.

Lastly

, I hope my friend will be considered and the house will be reserved for him.

Furthermore

, thanks a bunch for your anticipated cooperation. Your Sincerely, Thomas Cole

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