The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.
Above all, some people deem that our societies have achieved gender equality, but generally males depreciate
females
and don’t believe, that women
can do the same work as men
even better. In my opinion, the position of women
changed to the best side, despite is frequently rules constrain mainly actions relevant to women
.
On the one hand, for comparing with over the past 50 years now females
is having more opportunities along with the main factor is accepting education for women
. Becoming able to make your own decision is part of satisfactory growth. Besides
, females
started to show from their own experience, that they could be boss in a global company, has many employees and be nevertheless
successfully than men
. For instance
, Kim Kardashian who
has a business with a turnover of millions of dollars and she don’t need to prove to anyone that she can do it all at the same level as Correct pronoun usage
apply
men
significantly better in spite of some male who can’t accept this
success without doubt about the path of achievements.
On the other hand
, the main problem was and will always gender
inequality if Add a missing verb
be gender
females
will begin to rule this
world, males will take it lightly and trust, that women
can only sit at home and take care of children. Furthermore
, men
permit to do cruel actions to women
and consider, that they have permission for this
. For this
reason, repeatedly women
are forced to struggle with injustice from generally accepted norms.
In conclusion, I believe that in the future societies acknowledge how dangerous and general this
problem is, but although
now some organizations for protection rules of women
have a suitable reputation and people who want to live in an equal world where everyone has the same rules. Only in a way where all people will apprehend real issues world can have a satisfactory time ahead.Submitted by d.vodolazckina on
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