You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that the

product

delivered from your

shop

was not functioning properly. Because of that, I would like to return it and I want you to refund me a hundred

percent

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. I recently ordered a Bluetooth mouse from your

shop

last

week and regretfully discovered that the

product

was not functioning properly. When I open the delivery box, I found the item in bad shape. The plastic packaging was open, and the cover of the battery compartment was broken. I tried to test whether it is still usable.

Although

the red LED was lit, it is not functioning at all. I was really frustrated as I need that mouse very urgently to finish my design assignment which will be due at the beginning of

week. Despite the possibility that I could get a new

product

from you as a warranty claim, I had to buy a new mouse urgently from a

shop

near my home because of my urgency as I just mentioned. I will find a spare timeslot in the coming Friday afternoon to visit your

shop

and return your broken

product

and collect the refund from you. Best regards, Zay Yar Myint.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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