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Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same tv programs as their friends. Should Parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your experience.

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It is undeniable that
some
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in some
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children
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children's
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activities
parents
 should guide them on the advantages and disadvantages. Some people believe that normally,
children
 need to do the same
activities
 as their friends.
such
 as playing the same games and watching the same TV programs.
However
, In my opinion, that
activities
 should ask
permission
 from their
parents
first
. The reasons to support my point of view will be outlined.
First
 of All, I strongly believe that
children
 should have the right to choose
activities
 that they really need to do.
However
, some
activities
 are not matches for
children
such
 as violent movies, shooting games, or some
activities
 that content not ready for
children
 ages.
Additionally
,
that is
 the reason why
children
 should ask
permission
 from their
parents
first
 and
parents
 have an important role
to
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in
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 teaching and taking care of their own
child
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child's
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activities
.
In addition
, sometimes
children
 tend to do
activities
 without asking
permission
 from their
parents
 and in that ,incident
parents
 should punishment in the right way and talk and let them understand by talking after that parent should be together with them, while they do that activity and describes advantages and disadvantages and that will make a favourable effect on them and relationship in the family. In conclusion, some
children
activities
children
 should ask
permission
 from their
parents
first
 because some
activities
 are not matches for
children
such
 as violent movies, shooting games, or some
activities
 that contents not ready for
children
 ages
parents
 have an important role
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
 teaching and taking care of their own child
activities
.
On the contrary
, sometimes
children
 tend to do
activities
 without asking
permission
 from their
parents
 and should have punishment in the right way and let them understand by talking after that parent should be together with them, while they do that activity and describes advantages and disadvantages that will make a favourable effect on them and relationship in the family.
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