The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten to much. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature
The provided graphs reflect percentages
in
particular meals. Change preposition
for
According to
these charts, there were three kinds of nutrients; sodium, saturated fat and added sugar. All these kinds may be unhealthy if eaten to
much. These meals Replace the word
too
consumed
in the USA.
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are consumed
Overall
, after observing the provided graphs, it can be seen that breakfast had the biggest amount of it in
all Change preposition
of
kind
.
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The
first graph, breakfast had the least Change preposition
In the
percentage
(14%) and snacks had the same percentage
. However
, dinner had the biggest amount of sodium with 43
% Correct article usage
a 43
percentage
.
The
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In the
second
diagram, dinner had 37% percentage
which was the largest Replace the word
percent
percentage
and breakfast had only 16%.
The
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In the
last
graph, snacks had the largest amount with 42%, while
lunch has a small percentage
19
%.
The diagrams show that every typical meal consumed in the USA contains Change preposition
of 19
percentage
of at least 14% of nutrients that can be bad for health.Add an article
a percentage
the percentage
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