Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: - Describe the problem and why you are unhappy - Arrange for an engineer to visit your home - Request a reduction in your bill

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Dear Sir, My name is Jenny and I am writing
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letter to draw your draw
yur
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your
attention to an issue which is
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currently
currentlly
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currently
facing because of your
internet
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service. Yesterday, the
internet
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speed drop way down in the evening for some reason and I'm still having the same issue. As I work from home,
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internet
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is
very
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important factor for me and it could possibly affect my work. I tried to reset the router, but it didn't work out. I called the service
center
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as well but I had to wait for about 3 hours to reach out
an
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agent but
then
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they told me that they had nothing they can do for me and
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me to write
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letter to you. If it is possible, I would like to book an appointment with an engineer from your side and let them take a look at my
internet
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router and the cable to investigate what the issue was.
Tommorrow
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Tomorrow
around noon would be perfect for me. Having said that, I would appreciate
if
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I can get a discount for
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matter on
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month's bill as well as there is a statement that says customers can request a reduction if they go through any
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inconvenience
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inconvenience
. I am looking forward to your prompt reply. Regards, Jenny Choi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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