Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that

universities

should offer only career-oriented

courses

rather than teaching

arts

subjects

like philosophy, which is thought to be expensive and

less-productive

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. I think practical

courses

can be given more focus, but

arts

subjects

should remain

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an option for those who

demand

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. The fundamental reason behind my disapproval

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the complete termination of teaching

arts

at colleges is because

this

creates an imbalance in the range of

courses

the

universities

offer. To be precise, a university should have a wide range of

subjects

and languages to teach, as it has to focus

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producing graduates from different streams. One has to understand the fact that

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society needs the service of people like musicians, actors et cetera, and

this

is possible only if a variety of

arts

subjects

are taught along with job-oriented

courses

. Another reason why I tend to oppose the suggestion is

because

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it closes the doors for those who are really interested in

such

subjects

. To be clearer, even though there is less demand for these

subjects

at present, it can be seen that a considerable proportion of people choose these because of their personal interests.

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, these should remain

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options in the

courses

a university

offer

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offers

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. I have to admit that today’s world requires more graduates from practical fields

such

as doctors, nurses and engineers. The

universities

of a country should produce enough of

such

qualified professionals each year, lest they would opt for other countries for studies and work.

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would result in

lack

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of qualified professionals in a country

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and would affect its development adversely. To conclude, though

universities

should meet the demands of the existing job sector by producing more graduates from practical areas, I feel the opportunity to study

arts

should not be withdrawn.