You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter x describe the problem with the equipment x explain what happened when you phoned the shop x say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter in connection with an

oven

toaster that I bought on 20th September from one of your

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in London. The problem is that I plugged in the

oven

upon I unboxed it at home and I realised that the

oven

was unable to warm up properly. I followed the instruction many times to make sure about the

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of installation.

Then

, I phoned your customer service for

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immediate help, but

unfortunately

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there was no answer on your part. I would like you fully understand the situation and help me to change

this

equipment as soon as possible. The serial number of the product is 2586554 which is written on the invoice. Please inform me about the possible way I will be able to

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receive

recieve

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receive

my new

oven

through an email provided in your shop. I am looking forward to hearing from you very soon Yours faithfully Amir Safa

Submitted by amir.safa1984 on Fri Sep 02 2022

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thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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