Genetic engineering for both medical and agricultural purposes is causing increasing amount of controversy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering and explain your opinion.

It is hard to deny that genetic engineering for whatever purpose may cause some bad influences

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society when

people

develop it in

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way, and

such

a fact leads impressionable

people

to generate the opinion that developing genetic engineering has more disadvantages than advantages, as the results which cause by wrong behaviours could throw society into chaos.

However

,

such

a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as national

status

, survival of

mankind

and feasibility are concerned, I strongly hold that genetic engineering in

medicine

and

agriculture

will bring us more benefits in the long run.

First

and foremost, doing some genetic engineering research in

medicine

or

agriculture

can elevate the national

status

, as the level of scientific development is a symbol of national

status

. To be more specific, with the development of technology and

economy

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, more and more countries attach importance to scientific research.

However

, developing genetic engineering in

medicine

or

agriculture

may lead to an unprecedented achievement for the country in terms of the scientific field, as

such

an act is a good way to improve the

status

of the country.

Furthermore

, the fact that developing genetic engineering related to

medicine

or

agriculture

can provide more possibilities for the survival of

mankind

. Take the case of

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special rice, which is a product of genetic engineering. the total grain output has been increased because of the invention of

this

special rice, letting more

people

not suffer from hunger which causes the death of

mankind

. Take another case of the well-known King pill, which is a drug used to treat cancer.

this

pill is very expensive so many families can not afford it in the past. the drug output has

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increased

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the use of genetic engineering, so patients can buy it at a low price.

Therefore

, had it not been for developing genetic engineering, we would never have been able to improve the possibility of

mankind

's survival.

Nevertheless

, a voice arises that genetic engineering for whatever purpose will bring society a lot of problems when

people

develop it for personal purposes or interests as it may disrupt social order. Ironically, the government has already made some laws related to genetic engineering to restrict

people

's behaviour, and if the relevant authorities increase the supervision of

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scientific research institutions, the problems mentioned above can be effectively avoided.

Therefore

, developing genetic engineering is feasible. In conclusion, I maintain that the country should develop genetic engineering for both medical and agricultural purposes as

such

policy is feasible to implement, and benefits our national

status

and the survival of

mankind

. Admittedly, as my favourite quote from James Madison goes,as long as the reason of man continues fallible, different opinions will be formed, and some

people

may oppose me.

However

, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my articles.