Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) What part of the service would you like to change?

Dear Manager, I regret to write

this

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letter to bring to your notice the new bus

schedule

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which is causing inconvenience to the entire public due to the odd time's departure and arrival times. Having said that, there are regular commuters from my place to the middle of the downtown to perform their duties at their workplace and now due to

this

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change in the

schedule

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everyone is miserable and terrified with their long travels via different sources. As you heard, we may need to come up with a good transport plan which is going reduce the travel plan and eventually they feel happy with their travel.

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, if we have any direct service

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going to offer a smooth ride to them despite the busy

schedule

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at the workplace. I look forward to seeing the change in the travel

schedule

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and hope it will come soon before it gets worse . Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999

Sep 9, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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7 paragraphs

157 words

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Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) What part of the service would you like to change?

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