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The position of the women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 year. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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From the past to the present the position of
women
 has changed and
women
 could impact on
next
 generation until they will
improvement
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 in their lives and societies.
However
, societies do not accept gender equality and I completely disagree with
this
 reason. The
first
 reason is that nowadays
women
 and
men
 have similar rights and rules in society. Both of them
work
 in the government sector and
also
women
 have crucial rules in that
work
.
Therefore
, in some different ,positions
women
 rule over
men
.
For example
, Queen Elizabeth is a great powerful woman in the world she could govern some countries over and over for years. The
second
 reason, in the modern generation,
women
 have the freedom to choose to have careers
,
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 and earn the type of income and education. In the past,
women
 just had to
work
 in their house and took care of their children and do housekeeping and they did not have permission to
learnto
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learn to
 learn
education
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 but today's
women
 can choose what are they interested in and
also
 in society they
work
 shoulder to shoulder with
men
 and they defend their rights In conclusion,
women
 can obtain their careers and education
such
 as
men
 and have power without the need for
men
.
Therefore
,
women
 are more likely to be equal to
men
.
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