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Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The given piecharts depict the rate of the
use
 of
water
 for different
purposes
 in six continents of the world. Overall, the consumption of
water
 for agricultural
purposes
 takes the highest proportion in most areas.
However
, North
America
 and
Europe
use
water
 for industrial
use
 more than others.
To begin
 with, the amount of agricultural
use
 of
water
 in Africa, Central
Asia
, South Africa, and South East
Asia
 is remarkably higher than
other
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 sectors. To be accurate, approximately the average is 80%. Other
purposes
 take a small minority of the chart.
Europe
 and North
America
use
water
 for agriculture marginally lower than for industry, about 35% and 50% respectively.
Moreover
,
Europe
 and North
America
 show more evenly shared sectors for each of the
purposes
. The amount of domestic
use
 is low in every area. In Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
, domestic
purposes
 take a small proportion of the chart, nearly 7%. It is significantly higher in
Europe
, South
America
, and North
America
, around 15%. According to the chart, the highest proportion of domestic
use
 is 19%, in South
America
.
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