The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams depict the different stages of salmon’s life cycle.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that according to
the size and age of salmon they live in three different places.
At the begining
of Correct your spelling
beginning
life
cycle, adult fish shift from Add an article
the life
a life
sea
to Correct article usage
the sea
upper
Correct article usage
the upper
river
, where water flow is slow. Then
, eggs are layed
between small Correct your spelling
laid
played
stone
and reeds. Five to six months Fix the agreement mistake
stones
latter
Correct your spelling
later
layed
eggs become fries which are 3-8 cm long tiny fish. After that, they come to the downside of the Correct your spelling
lay
river
where water
flow is running fast. Correct article usage
the water
Nearly
4 years they live Change preposition
For nearly
their
and increase their body length to 12-15 cm before becoming smolts.
Smolts move to sea from Replace the word
there
river
. They have been living approximately
5 years and convert to adult salmons which are five times larger than smolts. Change preposition
for approximately
Then
, they ready
for breading and move to Add a missing verb
are ready
upper
Add an article
the upper
river
for
lay eggs.Change preposition
to
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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