You and some of your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very please with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
- give details of your visit to the restaurant
- explain the reason for the celebration
- say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir,

 I am writing
this
letter to complement the
food
and other services provided by your
restaurant
last
week. It was a
mesmerised
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experience on 28th June when I celebrated my 18th birthday along with my friends in your
restaurant
and spend almost 3 hrs without any disturbance. 

I pre-booked the table for 15 members on 15th June via phone call. The ambience and music were amazing on that day. I really liked the different varieties of cuisines which the
restaurant
has served in my budget.The scenic view of the city from
rooftop
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adds
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restaurant
restaurent
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restaurants
into the limelight.All the staff members have
a jovial personalities
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and they took wonderful care of my friend’s demands.
Moreover
,I will never forget the surprise cake offered by the floor manager.

 The authentic delicacies of regional
food
and drinks have increased my appetite.The garnishing of all dishes was embellishing the serving of
food
which I haven’t experienced till yet in our town. I must say that
this
cafe is one of the hygienic
food
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. I will definitely recommend
this
restaurant
to my office manager to celebrate all future parties here. 

Looking forward to continuing supreme services.

 Yours faithfully, 
Rahil Kumar
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