You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to provide feedback on our recent office event that we organized at your hotel. We organized

this

party to celebrate our company's fifth anniversary.

Although

I was afraid

initially

, the part went really well. We started the party by recognizing top employees and awarded them with trophies. We played several fun games and perform group activities.

Also

, I would like to thank you for providing amazing services. All the staff members were incredibly helpful and they are taking care of each individual personally.

Also

, the food was pretty awesome ,especially the lobster. One thing I noticed was that the party was missing a DJ. I would strongly recommend your hotel to my friends for big events Yours faithfully, Ishant Kesar

Submitted by ishantkesar on Tue Sep 20 2022

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8 paragraphs

129 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people says that instead of preventing climate changes we should find with it. Do you agree or disagree?

Of late, it is believed that students studying in secondary school and high school should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this argument?

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of politicians, rather than individuals, to reduce the world’s environmental damage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is an individual responsibilty to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.