You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to provide feedback on our recent office event that we organized at your hotel. We organized

this

party to celebrate our company's fifth anniversary.

Although

I was afraid

initially

, the part went really well. We started the party by recognizing top employees and awarded them with trophies. We played several fun games and perform group activities.

Also

, I would like to thank you for providing amazing services. All the staff members were incredibly helpful and they are taking care of each individual personally.

Also

, the food was pretty awesome ,especially the lobster. One thing I noticed was that the party was missing a DJ. I would strongly recommend your hotel to my friends for big events Yours faithfully, Ishant Kesar

Submitted by ishantkesar on Tue Sep 20 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

129 words

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You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the party and how it went • explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service • suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that tourism promotes the economy while others argue that tourism destroy the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Many countries today are experiencing problems associated with noise pollution ( excessive noise pollution above a normal background noise) what are the cause of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected?