Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) What part of the service would you like to change?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding the recent changes that you have made in the
bus
service has become uncomfortable for me as well as other residents of that place. As my job Schedule is from 9 am to 5 pm and I usually took the
bus
and approximately walk 6 minutes at 8:40 am. But due to changes in the timing because of the construction in that area
bus
has started to arrive late from 9 am and the fact is that I started to get late for work could result in loss of my job. Apart From
this
, There used to be two
bus
services which have
also
declined and resulted in the rush in the single
bus
as that time of morning is the job of almost everyone out there around my area.
Such
changes have left a really bad impact on my daily routine and would like to replace them with something better.
For example
, in spite of using only
bus
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there could be more than 1
bus
but the timing of arrival could be in shifts and
also
there is an alternate path to follow the route to reach the destinations which could
also
be followed. I am hoping
such
suggestions could be helpful for you. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Jessica Sharma
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