The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrations demonstrate the comparison of Science
Park
in 13 years. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that some park
areas have been altered for the purpose of education, research and development over years.
Considering in the northern part of the park
, in 2008, there was grassland which is replaced with research
and development Correct article usage
the research
centre
today. Fix the agreement mistake
centres
Additionally
, the reception has been replaced with a University hub and the building remained adjacent to the offices. South of these facilities, business units remained unchanged over years, however
, car park
territory has been decreased to ensure more for Cyber security building. The field of grassland and woodland has been reduced for cyber security too.
In the south of the Science Park
, IT Centre has been substituted with Innovation
Correct article usage
the Innovation
centre
, a new station has been constructed on the railway which has been connected with Innovation Center, car Change the capitalization
Centre
park
and Cyber security with path
. Correct article usage
a path
Finally
, bike routes to the right and left sides of the roads and bus
stop to the east side of the Correct article usage
a bus
park
have been added.Submitted by azermukhtarov1 on
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