After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you agree or disagree?
• The majority of individuals think that
,
educators can improve the quality of education, Remove the comma
apply
however
our becoming Add the comma(s)
,however
a
political person depends more on our Correct article usage
apply
parents
. This
essay agrees that the
one of the best teachers Change the article
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are
our Change the verb form
is
parents
in our life. First
of all, our parents
are the people
who educate us from the time we are born until we go to school.
• On the one hand, parents
are the only people
who educate their children in all areas. Because when children are born, they
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their
parents
teach how
to behave and how to take with adults and friends , Correct pronoun usage
them how
in addition
from the moment we are born, we begin to be learn
the Change the verb form
learn
first
word when they
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their
parents
are talking with their close relatives and other close people
. For
example
my Add a comma
,example
parents
are the people
who taught me how to speak, how to deal with people
, how to walk properly, how our culture and customs are, what I do is bad and what I do is good.
• On the other hand
, we learn from those around us, we are brought up by watching them, especially we are brought up by looking our
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at our
parents
. If our parents
tell us to behave well, respect your
elders, Correct pronoun usage
our
do
not say bad things to anyone, Unnecessary verb
apply
do
not hurt Correct word choice
and do
your
heart, we will definitely try to do as our Correct pronoun usage
our
parents
told us. For example
, if your behavior
is good, if you treat everyone nicely, Change the spelling
behaviour
people
will always say that their parents
gave them a good upbringing, but they will never say that their teachers are good, therefore
a child is a mirror of their parents
.
• In conclusion, the best teachers in our life are our parents
, they are the only people
who educate us. That is
why the child is the same as the parents
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