Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?
These days more citizens have obtained access to electronic
games
and vast
number of adolescents have Change the article
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the vast
good
pleasure playing Correct article usage
a good
computarized
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computerized
games
. The main Correct your spelling
benefits
benefit
benefis
of Correct your spelling
benefits
this
are acquiring great skills
on computers and learning academic subjects; however
, the drawbacks are lack of social skills
and isolation.
Playing electronic games
might benefit some children
by acquiring great skills
on computers because they spend so many hours playing this
. Firstly
, adolescents are not afraid of turning on computers or electronic devices and they learn many skills
on how to manage this electronic devices
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these electronic devices
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familiarize
with laptops or electronic Replace the word
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games
. Furthermore
, some of this
video Correct determiner usage
these
games
have great academic materials that help them to improve grades
at school. They learn how to memorize complex concepts in a fun way that Correct pronoun usage
their grades
make
school more enjoyable. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
For instance
, In The United States, children
who start Correct your spelling
kindergarten
kindergarden
have Correct your spelling
kindergarten
a
free access to an app Remove the article
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call
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this
is a bilingual app that help
them to improve Change the verb form
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english
and memorize the alphabet in a pleasant way.
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their english
However
, one can not be blind and ignore that some of these children
tend to have
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of
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skills
by playing so many hours computerized
video Change preposition
of computerized
games
. Although
this
might help them, some of these pre-teens do not like to talk to each other, so they have no idea how to start a natural conversation. Another drawback is that many of them ended up suffering from isolation because they have not met other people to get along with. More importantly, some of them need Correct your spelling
psychological
phychological
help to teach them how to start a friendship with other Correct your spelling
psychological
children
. To explain further
, in California many teenagers suffer from depression because they spend too Correct your spelling
many
may
hours playing Correct your spelling
many
playstation
that they have no social relationships with people Correct your spelling
PlayStation
at
their age, so Change preposition
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,eventually
this
situation turn
into a disease.
To conclude, having Correct subject-verb agreement
turns
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access
acces
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access
games
might be great
way to improve some computer Add an article
a great
skills
; however
, this
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to be Change the verb form
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a Change preposition
within
limit
time to avoid suffering from isolation or losing the ability Replace the word
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on
how to communicate with others.Change preposition
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