Write a letter to your manager telling him about how sitting for long hours for your work has affected your health. In your letter you should mention; 1. What health problems are you facing. 2. Give suggestions as to about what changes can be brought about to reduce the health risks on you and on your colleagues. 3. How will these changes be beneficial to the company when it comes to future employees.
Dear Sir,
My name is Shikha, and I am working as a Project Manager in our Firm for the
last
7 years. I am writing this
letter to inform you about my poor health condition right now.
I was facing severe neck pain for the last
week. I kept ignoring it as I had to work for long hours due to the work pressure. Yesterday, I went to the doctor for a check-up and he told me that it is not normal pain and instead
you got neck cervical pain and it is not curable. I felt so bad when I heard about this
. In fact, the doctor told me that it is because of your sitting job for long hours.
Now, I want to request you to please make some changes in the work culture, so that no one else would get the same issue. I have some suggestions which can be implemented to keep everyone fit such
as organising a yoga session every week, and after every 3-4 hours there should be some music on which employees can dance.
I am sure that this
will make everyone healthy and everybody will feel relaxed. Moreover
, the productivity of the employees would be increased. So, this
is totally beneficial for the company.
I hope you take appropriate action on my suggestions.
Yours Sincerely,
ShikhaSubmitted by shikha_dhingra on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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