It is often argued that National Holidays should be celebrated while others suggest the government's investiments should be spent in public services

It is often argued that National Holidays should be celebrated while others suggest the government's investments should be spent

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public services. I strongly believe the celebrations are

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essential

essencial

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essential

not only for

the

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social projects

,

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but

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for the

economy

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.

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, the

money

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should be well distributed. The following paragraphs will highlight both views based on my opinion and some relevant examples.

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of all, governments invest a lot of

money

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to decorate

cities

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and create

holidays'

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holidays

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programs

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. For a celebrational environment, authorities have to forward high costs which harm

public

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the public

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budget.

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, small

cities

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that

hier

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have

expensive singers for only two nights of concerts

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has

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no

money

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to pay public servers.

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, the health and education quality decreases significantly. For that reason, celebration spending should be well

admistrate

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administrate

administrated

,

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,

cities

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would become in crisis and people would suffer due to the two days of holiday.

On the other hand

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, those

programs

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are extremely important to the

economy

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. Tourists can dramatically change a city's

economy

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,

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because they have to pay for accommodation, food and transport, improving

companies

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companies'

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profit

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and rising job opportunities.

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, it is easy to find hotels, restaurants and transport services in big

cities

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as there

are

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huge demand.

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, social

programs

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helps

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to prevent

individual's

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mental illnesses

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as isolation and depression. To conclude, in my opinion,

Holiday's

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Holiday

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celetrations

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celebrations

celebration

should happen as they are important to the

economy

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of the place, and

also

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promote social

programs

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.

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, the government should distribute well the

money

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avoiding spending the

money

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for

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other areas of the city

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as health and education.