nowadays, many families move overseas for job opporunities. some think this is beneficial for the children of the families, while others think children will find it difficult. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, many

people

are immigrating to different countries for exploring better job positions. Some

people

believe that moving abroad is

also

beneficial for their offspring while

on the other hand

, another section of society has an opinion that

children

find it difficult to sustain themselves in a new zone. I believe that moving overseas is a better decision for families and their kids because of the following reasons which are explained in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, it is a life-changing decision when a person shifts to an entirely new place in a different country because the environment in a new place is totally different. The new environment is beneficial for the

children

because they will learn new things from the school, will make new friends and will adapt new culture. After moving to a new country, they will have exposure to new opportunities and ,

moreover

, they will learn new languages. So, overall,

this

will lead to better development of kids and they will have a better future.

For instance

, the offspring who move with their families will have an education qualification in that country and in the future, it will have an edge over the immigrants in finding a job. Contrary to the above view, some

people

believe that

children

find it hard to settle in a new place and up to a certain extent they are

also

right because when a person moves to a new area, sometimes their offsprings find it difficult to make new friends and

this

leads to social anxiety.

Similarly

, at a new school, when a child finds it hard to compete because of the new environment

then

he starts losing morale and eventually loses interest in his studies.

For instance

,if a person moved from India with his family to the USA, the mother tongue of an Indian kid is not English but the kids in the USA will be fluent in English, so the Indian kid will have an inferiority complex and will not be able to perform good and will end up getting low grades. To summarize, I would say that though, different

people

have different opinions regarding moving to a new area but I believe that it is the best decision for

children

's upbringing.

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