The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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There are
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Two
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two
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maps
which
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illustrating
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development
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the development
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of
City
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the City
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hospital in 2007 and 2010. In
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two
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the two
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maps,They are three differences between
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two
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the two
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years that about addition
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two
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of two
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roundabout
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in
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on
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two
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ends of
hospital
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the hospital
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road
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, making
new
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the new
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public car park and
building
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the building
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a
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bus station .
In
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two
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intersections of
hospital
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the hospital
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road
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with
ring
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the ring
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road
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in
north
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and city
road
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in
south
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the south
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were building
two
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roundabouts in 2010 .
also
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made public car park in
east
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the east
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of the city near of ring
road
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that entrance of it being from
ring
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the ring
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road
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.so staff car park being separate for staffs and its entrance is from
ring
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the ring
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road
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. In 2010,
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of
bus
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a bus
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stop
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we have a bus station
in
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west
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the west
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of the hospital
road
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and it have access to
two
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roundabouts
in
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at
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ends
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the ends
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of the hospital
road
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • road access
  • city hospital
  • traffic flow
  • public transport facilities
  • intersection
  • roundabout
  • car park
  • dedicated
  • modifications
  • congestion
  • accessibility
  • hospital entrance
  • parking areas
  • main features
  • signage
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