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In the past, people lived in the same place in their life. However, it is common that now people change their place and often live in different places during their life. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

#people #place #life #change #places #development
To choose
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the
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a
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 suitable
life
place
 is one important problem that many
people
 face.
However
, whether they need to
change
home
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homes
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 is a controversial issue. In my opinion,
people
 should
to
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apply
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move
the
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their
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 address when they
change
 their
jobs
 to other cities, it is a positive mind. Nowadays, lots of
people
 who live in
this
 full of
competitive
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the competitive
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 world are working hard every day. Sometimes, they have to
change
 their
jobs
. The salaries that they earn
has
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 a crucial role to play. Sometimes the new
jobs
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job
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 is
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in at
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at
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a
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different
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the different
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 city since they have to remove their address even with their whole family members. To move and live in
other
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another
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place
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places
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 is extremely important for them because they could get higher benefits or more opportunities
of
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in
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 their
jobs
.
Therefore
,
this
 situation
are
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is
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 becoming more and more common.
In addition
, to
change
other
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another place
other places
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place
 can help them to build new
society
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 communication and
also
 can make their family members expand their horizons. They can learn
different
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about different
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 cultures, traditions and lifestyles.
For example
, if they move to other countries, their children can study at
local
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a local
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school
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schools
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 to learn
new
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a new
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 language and get new friends. It is useful and a good way for them to improve their studies and
societies
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 skills. Some
people
 even need to
change
 their
place
 several times during their
life
. The simple reason is that they are creating more benefits for their family in the future. That means if they don’t want to
change
 anything, maybe they will do the same basic job all their
life
, as well they couldn’t get
chance
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a chance
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 to
change
 their
life
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living
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 standard.
In addition
, changing the
place
 where they live is a positive decision. It depends on if
people
 want to get
better
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a better
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life
 for themselves or their
family
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families
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.
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