You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. – Polite. No one responds to insults. – Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? – Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

Dear Sr / Madam I am writing to let you know how was my experience at your restaurant which I had many problems and I would like to be refunded. I went on the
last
Friday night with my husband and my parents to celebrate our anniversary as I have heard well about it we decided to book there. As soon as we arrived, about 8pm, the receptionist told us that she could not find the reservation and we had no table. We needed to wait over 60 minutes on the quiu which was very disappointing. After that, when we
finally
set, our table was dirty and the waiter told us there were no cleaned towers left. So anyway, we decided to order, but when I started to eat, my food had meat in it, at that time I got extremely upset as I had told the waiter I am vegetarian and I would like the dish with no meat at all. Please ,
hopefully
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you will consider
this
e-mail and give us an apology for
this
inconvenience and a refund as soon as possible. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Izabella
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