You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned.

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing to let you know that I was so grateful for how my computer was fixed at your facility. It is amazing that you manage to organize my stuff in a thing I thought, could not work anymore. Yesterday, I called the reception area of your establishment that my computer was damaged. I told them that it is suddenly abrupt and nothing showed on my screen. They asked me to give my address, so they can pick up my gadget. In just 30 minutes they arrived and took my things. They informed me

also

that they will deliver it early in the morning by the

day. I thought they will delay my item but they manage to bring it back at the right time. I adore your staff for handling my computer in a professional manner. They are very helpful and responsive to all my queries. I want you to send my gratitude to those staff and to continue the good services they are providing for your clients. Thank you so much for the wonderful management. Yours sincerely, XXX

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