Sending criminals to prison is not the most effective method to deal with crime. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, some individuals agree with education
and job training is
more useful than sending criminals to prison, while some Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
believe that knowledge is not effective as well. This
essay will be examined both views in detail.
To begin
with, some people
who
agree with teaching to increase their knowledge Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
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through
education
. Initially
, there are numerous people
who have a
high Remove the article
apply
education
support it
become to Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
good Correct article usage
apply
person
in society. Fix the agreement mistake
people
For example
, some parents have a high salary to sending
their children to Wrong verb form
send
the
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apply
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institutes, they would be chosen good things Replace the word
reputed
to
their children namely the best friends' connection and getting high Change preposition
for
knowledges
. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
Last
but not least, besides
training, families institute is the most essential for teach
their children to be the best person. Change the verb form
teaching
For instance
, some individuals receive a
good logic, they will grow likely good Correct article usage
apply
person
.
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people
On the contrary
, there are
various disagreement from some individuals that Change the verb form
is
the
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apply
education
and job training does not answer anymore. They would send criminals to prison because they would not to live with them. Moreover
, some poor families, they have not money
to attend Correct article usage
the money
the
school and gain knowledge. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, they are not ambition
to develop their finances. Replace the word
ambitious
In addition
, in some developing countries should be strict rules. For instance
, the government in Thailand does not create a
serious legislation which leads to crimes that will occur every day.
To conclude, it can be seen that there are several reasons of Remove the article
apply
education
and job training are the most effective ways. However
, some people
disagree with these ideas ,especially in developing countries, thus
the government have the important industry to solve it.Submitted by prnpt4i on
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